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I panicked somewhere in the middle of the editing
process for Animal Dreams. I was
worried that the story was missing "something", so I committed
one of the cardinal sins of writing: I wrote a prologue.
But not just any prologue -- a dream-sequence prologue. A
double no-no. My editor and critique partner handled my
dementia with care: They agreed that while there was nothing
wrong with the prologue, per se, it weakened the beginning of
the book. I trust them both, especially in moments when I
don't trust myself, so out
it went.
PLEASE NOTE: This is a
deleted scene, and does not appear in the book
Animal Dreams.
ANIMAL DREAMS
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Prologue
She was dreaming again. She knew it even
as her skin prickled from the heat of the afternoon sun, and the
gentle breeze teased her hair around her shoulders. She stood
in the middle of the large field and waited. It wouldn’t be
long now.
She had been
here many times before, but never when she was awake. It was as
familiar to her as her own home in the city now, maybe even more
so. Birds chirped loudly in the distance, and the air was heavy
with the scent of the earth and grass. It seemed so real.
Maybe that’s why she felt more alive here than anywhere else.
The ground
vibrated softly under her bare feet and she knew he was coming.
The horse crested the hill in a burst of motion, thundering
toward her, his deep black coat glinting blue in the bright
sunlight. As usual, her breath caught in her throat at the
magnificent sight of him.
He came to a
graceful stop a few feet from her.
I’ve been waiting, she chided.
Not as long as I’ve been waiting for you, love. She smiled,
shaking her head at his nonsense, and stepped forward.
She brought
her hand up to stroke his strong neck, marveling at the warmth
of him under her hands. He had his summer coat, but his fur was
still long and thick between her fingers and soft as silk. He
lowered his head, and she rubbed her cheek against his. When
she inhaled, she took in his vibrant, wild scent.
He nudged her
with his nose. Let’s go.
She mounted
him easily from the ground – it was a dream, after all –
and they took off across the field. She laughed in delight; she
felt like they were flying over the lush countryside. She felt
free.
But it
wouldn’t last.
She threaded
her fingers more tightly through the horse’s long mane,
comforted by the solid hairs in her hands, and pushed aside the
thought of her life outside her dreams. This was where she
belonged, with this horse. And maybe this time she would get
lucky. Maybe, this time, she wouldn’t wake up.
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